仿写句子长句(手把手教你写长难句)

很多小伙伴写作语言提升会遇到瓶颈，不知道如何让自己的写作语言达到阅读文章的水平，其实方法很简单：Imitation 仿写

通过仔细分析和对照仿写，将地道的句子结构转化为自己的表达习惯，语言水平自然提高，今天就详细讲解5个句子，均选自近期的著名外刊文章。

1. It takes nothing away from this year’s Nobelists to say that RCTs (randomised controlled trials) are a valuable tool when used carefully.

句子分析：句子结构相对简单，前半部分是it做形式主语的主句，重点是后半部分when引导的时间状语从句，因为从句的主语是主句结尾作宾语的“tools”，所以省略了“tools are”，看上去结构并不完整。完整的从句应该是“when (tools are) used carefully”。此处的规则是：从句中主语与主句主语或宾语一致时，可以与be动词一起省略，从句动词根据主被动变为doing或者done的形式。

长难句公式：主 谓 宾+when 状语从句（从句主语是主句的宾语）

仿写范例：Late school time improved health and attendance rather than test scores when compared with regular schedule. (compare 与test score时被动关系，故用done的形式)

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2. America’s economy, though sluggish by historical standards, has benefited from an ever-reliable engine: the American consumer.

句子分析：句子主干被though引导的让步状语从句所切割，将主语和动词分开两端。though分句省略了主语+be，补充修饰主语America's economy。句尾用冒号引出对主干宾语“an ever-reliable engine”的解释。

长难句公式：主语+，though+adj(让步状语从句)，谓语：名词

仿写范例：The British museum, though free to the public, never fails to attract favourable sponsors: the old money in Britain.

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3. The job of our taste buds and the odor receptors in our noses is to detect chemicals—in our food or in the environment.

句子分析：A of B结构作主语，系动词后to do做表语，用引号表示解释说明，引出表示地点的介词短语。这个句型中可以通过变化A代指的名词表示不同的内容：function（功能），benefit（优势），reason（原因），advantage（优势），damage（缺点），contribution（优势），result（结果）等

长难句公式：AofB be to do——介词短语

仿写范例：The contribution of working during the school time is to equip students skills needed in work place--out of campus.

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4. Wang and her colleagues wondered whether they could substitute plants for oil as a starting ingredient.

句子分析：whether引导的宾语从句；as a starting ingredient介词短语作修饰，表明被修饰词oil的作用（Use）

长难句公式：主谓+whether宾语从句+as介词短语做修饰

仿写范例：Human beings have been seeking whether there is any life form on Mars as another crable of life.

5. In a time when minorities held very few jobs in mathematics and science, Johnson was a trailblazer（先驱者）.

句子分析：句子主干在句尾高亮部分，前半部分是介词短语（in a time）+定语从句（when……）

长难句公式：表时间介词短语+定语从句when+主谓，+主谓

仿写范例：In the era when letters are commonly used in daily communication, postman is a sought-after job.

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